Hi again,
today I have a new proposal for you.
Imagine that you are on holiday in London and you want to email a friend to explain what are you doing there.
You can use the following text as a model:
Hi Josep,
I'm on holiday here in London with my parents and my brother Adam. It's always raining here, so we always have to take the unbrella with us.
At the moment we I'm sitting in an Internet café with my brother and we're eating a sandwich. My mum is shopping next to the café and my father is visiting the Tate Gallery. He really likes art.
Tomorrow we're visiting the London Eye and Westminster Abbey.
I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Albert.
Finally, a short guide for London City.
Enjoy it.
70 comentaris:
Hy oscar!!
I'm Marc. I am in London, with my parents and my sister Laia, we have seen many sites.
It's sunny and windy every day.
I'm in the hotel, in this computer.
My sister and my mum are in the shoppingcentre and my dad is in the swim in the hotel he love swimming.
I hope you're good.
See you soon.
Marc Torres
albert e clicat abans de posar el nom a publicar...
ho sento
Marc TorRes
Hello Albert, this is my redaction;
Hi Helena,
I'm on holiday here in London with my elder cousin. Her name is Noelia. It's sunny here, so we often go for a walk.
At the moment we are visiting Big Ben. We really like it here. Every day we visit a lot of things, moseums, famous bildings, parks and we go shopping on the flea-market. There are a lot of funny things.
Tomorrow we're going to Buckingham Palace and Piccadilly Circus. I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Eva Jiménez
Albert, this is my redaction:
Hi sister!!
I'm in London whith us parents.We staying in a hotel near Saint Jame's Park. Now we are in the internet café. Today it's sunny. London is fantastic. Today in the morning we visiting the National Gallery and in the noon we have lunch in a restaurant near there. I love swimming and that yesterday in afternoon swimmming in the pool to hotel until nightfall.
Tomorrow we visiting the Buckinjam Palace and go to the shopping centre so buy clothes. I love holidays. I love London.
See you soon.
Marta Barrena
ups!! He posat anónim!!! Perdona...:&
Hola profe sóc la Laura Fischer, aquí et deixo la redacció:
Hi Sacky,
I am in London with my parents, my sister Júlia and my brother Gabriel. London is a big city.
Today we're going to Big Ben and Sant Paul's Cathedral. At the moment my sister and I are in a Internet cafe, dad is at the big museum and mum and Gabriel are at the Hyden Park.
We're having good luck then it's sunny, so we can go for a walk every day.
Tomorrow we are going to London Eye and the Houses of Parliment.
Well Sacky, I hope you are having a good time.
Your friend Laura.
Laura
Hola profe soc la jennifer mulero ara escriure la meva redacció:
Hello Laura!!!!!!!
I'm Jenni. I'm holiday here in London, with my parents and my brother Jose,visited many things i some of them are: the Big Ben,the sooppings and Sant Paul's Cathedral.The weather is good and very hot.
Tomorrow going to seeing the museum.I hope you are having a good time.
Reply I LOVE YOU!!!!
ATT:your friend jenny
Hola Albert soc la Melisa:
Hi Laura:
I'm on holiday in London with sister and my sister and my cousin.
It's usually cloudy here,so it is boring at the moment we're going to eating out, and later we're visiting natural history museum and somerset house, later my sister in going to hotel, and I'm going to shopping.
Tomorrow we're visiting to the Hide park.
I hope see you soon.
Melisa López 1C
Albert aquí et deixo la meva redacció:
Hi Helga
I'm on holiday here in London with my mum, dad and brother. It's warm but not hot here. The only penalty of this city is which does not have beach. The first thing that we have visit is the Big Ben, later go up to London Eye.
Now i am eating pizza in Picadilly Circus.
I'm having a very good time.
See you soon,
Anna
Albert sóc l'Anna Molins de 1r A me endescuidat de posar el nom al títol.
Anna
Hi Joan,
I'm on holiday here in London with my parents and my brother. It's very cold and snowing, so we often cycling in London.
At the moment I'm sitting a internet cafe, my mum is sopping, my brother is in a toy shop and my father is watching F1 on TV.
Tomorrow we're visiting the Big Ben and the London Eye. I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Axel
Hi, sergi!
i´m cristian. I´m London with my parents and my sister nerea.
It´s windy every day. raiting this is my computer, my mum and my sister are in the big beng and my dad is in the hotel.
see you soon
cristian Alvarez Juan
Hello Albert, this is my redaction;
Hi Laura!!
I am in London with my parents, my sister Clara.
Today we're going to Big Ben and Big Museums.London is a big city.
At the moment my sister and I are in a Restaurant, dad is at the big museum and mum are at the National Gallery. Today it's snowing and cold.
Tomorrow we are going to London Eye and the Houses of Parliment.
Well Laura, I hope you are having a good time.
Your friend Gemma.
BAY LAURA!! KISSSss**
Gemma Berenguer 1rA
Albert aqui et deixo el treball
Hi Elena
I'm on holiday here in London with my parents and my brother. It's very cloudy and windy, so we go to visit the most inportant in the city.
Yesterday we went to visit the Big Ben,it's fantastic! After then, we went to visit the British museum, it's very big and very interesting because there are mummys of egypt.
At the moment we are visiting Buckingham Place and the afternoon we will go the wax's museum.
Tomorrow we will go to visit the churck's St.Paul and the Windsor Castle.
See you soon,
Carol!
Hi marinaa,
I'm in London, with my parents and my brother Marc, It's very cold and winter.
Tomorrow visiting Westminster Abbey.
At the moment we i'm siting in a internet cafe. My dad and my brother they breakfast in a Bar and my mum in the shoping centre.
I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Gloria Oller
Albert aquí et deixo la meva radacció:
Hi Anna!
I'm holiday in London, with my parents and my brother.
It's raining here.
At the moment i staying with my brother in the London Eye and
my parents visit the Tower of London.
Tomorrow we visit the Hyde Park.
There you can go with water scooter. You pass a good moment.
See you soon.
Helga Martí.
Hola, Albert aquí deixo la meva redació:
Hi, Sergi!!!
I'm Borja. Herein London i'ts usually cloudy, with my parents and sister Nerea, and the hotel.
My sister and my mum in the shopping center, and my dad, at the moment we visiting Big Ben.
I then went to the hotel to the swimming, and yacutchi.
I love London.
See you soon.
profee!! esmerat am ls notess!!!
Hi Jordi,
I'm on holiday here in London with my basketball team (CB Breda). It's raining here every day, so we stay in a hotel.
At the moment we are staying pub The Phoenix. We really like this place, so we come here every day.In this place I like to drink a juice of strawberries,bananas and mangos.
Tomorrow we're visiting a Universal Islands of adventure and Harry Potter experience. I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Joel Cruz
Hello Borja!
I like London,with my parents,brother and my cousin.
Holiday is cloudy.Is a lot city,and nice.
In the motel.
My father and my btother is in the visit the river Tamesis,in my mother is the shoping and my cousin.
Being ho estem pasan want big.
Carlos Gutierrez
Hi Alex,
I'm on holiday here in London with my mum, dad and brother. It's cold and raining.
At the moment I'm in the Tower of London (Big Ben).
Yesterday I visited the Botanical Gardens at Kew and the Palace of Westminster.
It is nice.
Tomorrow we're go to a movie at the IMAX cinema.
I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon.
Hi Gisela
I'm on holiday here in London with my father. There is sunny even that exists days that there makes cold and it rains.
The sites mas typical that I have visited an been: The treadmill, The picadilly, The BigBen, London's tower, Buckingham's palace, The change of guard officer, Harrods, etc.
Every night I am going to the Picadilly to walk and to play to the skittles.
The truth is that these vacations estan being unforgettable.
A greeting of your friend,
Lorena
En la quarta linea e puesto un mas me e equivocado,
y en la quinta linea tambien me equivocado en vez de poner noria e puesto treadmill.
es que e echo una parte con traductor la de la noria y eso.
Los errores que echo no los tomes en cuenta lo digo aora que me e fijado.
Lorena Vendrell 1ºA
Hi Sergi,
I'm on holiday here in London with my mum, dad. It's very hot here, it's coold and sunny every day.
I'm play football and tennis with my friends
Aleix Castells 1ErC
Hi laura,,I'm on holiday in London with my parents and my brother, I'ts sunny and very hot.
At the moment we walking in the city.Yesterday i'ts visit the Big Ben and Buckingham Place,i'ts very funny and very important.Tomorrow we will go to visit Windsor Castle.
London it's very perfecttt!!
CaRoL ViñAs!!
proofffee que me deixat el nom((juju)) bueno pos que soc la carol viñas okkkk dw
i que per cert aquest rellotge va tope de maL ee que io no le fet pas a aquesta horaa ee proffe..
kuantes pokes redaccions
Hello Albert, this is my redaction:
Hi Noelia,
I'm on holiday here in London with my elder friends. Him name is Noelia. It's sunny here, so we often go for a walk.
At the moment we are visiting Big Ben. We really like it here. Every day we visit a lot of things, museums, famous, parks and we go shopping on the flea-market. There are a lot of funny things.
Tomorrow we're going to Buckingham Palace and Piccadilly Circus. I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Hola albert sóc Gemma Mir de 1r B et deixo la meva redacció.
Hello Sílvia!!!
I'm holiday here in London with my parents and my sister Júlia.
It's raining.
In the moment visiting a British museum.it's very interesting.
Tomorrow visiting a Big Ben and the Parlament.
I hope you're good.
See you soon
Bye!
Gemma
Hi Maic,
I'm on holiday here in London with my parents. Today they are visit the Royal Opera House, but I boring. Later eating in the restaurant and the after is foggy and stomy.
But tonight stop the stormy, and we go out in the discoteca.
Hola Albert soc la Laura de 1ºC:
Hi Melisa.
I'm on holiday here in London witch my friend and my parents.
We're going to visit the Tower of London, tomorrow in the morning because it is going to do bad weather and we can`t go to the Royal Botanic Carders.
Later my friend and me are going to shopping while my parents visit the British Museum.
I hope you're good
I hope see you soon.
Laura.
Hi Pol!
I'm on holiday here in London with my brother Erik.
Now, we're staying in an hotel. Later, we go to swimming pool, because today is hot.
Tomorrow, we go to Stamford , tower of London and The London Eye.
See you soon,
Xoel
Hi Paula,
I'm holiday in London with my uncle.
It's sometines raining here, and it is foggy.
At the moment we're going to eating in the restaurant, and later we're do shopping center. Tomorrow we're visit the town.
See you soon;
Minerva.
Eiii kPASSA AlbeRtT aki et deixo la meva redacció vale??
Hi Peix,
I’m in holiday in London with my family. Always it’s sunny and cold. At the moment I’m in a house of my uncle and my cousins. All is in English it’s a very difficult because I’m spek in Catalan.
Tomorrow visit the London eye, it’s interesting the big bang, the Buckingham palace, the tower of London, Bramah Museum of Tea and Coffee, etc.
London It’s very interesting and is very, very big.
see you soon.
Hi Sira,,
I'm on holiday here in London, with
my mum, dad. and my brother. It's very cold, and windy.
At the moment I'm watching TV with my mum, and we're eating a little cake... it's delicious.
In the evenings we go to walk around.
I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Judit Pla,,
Hi Laura,
I'm on holiday here in London with my aunt and my cousin Edgar.
It's cloudy and windy every day. Today in the morning we the Buckingham Palace, we seen the changing of the guard.
We have lunch in the Camdem town.
After eating we gone to see the British Museum in the National Gallery.
British Museum i liked the part devoted to egypt although i could not see the tumb of tutankamon.
At night we gone to see the Big ben illuminates, is precious.
I like Londres, is a big city.
see you soon
nereaa
hi MArina,
I'm on holiday here in London with my mum, dad and brother.I'ts very cold and rainning.
At the moment i'm sitting in an internet cafe in front of the Big Ben and my brother is doing photo the Big Ben wiht my mum and dad.
Tomorrow go to change of royal guard.
I'm like holidays
See yiu soon
Miriam Miralles
Hi Berta!
I'm in London with my boyfriend.Her name is Tom.
Here it's sunny,so we are returning of the visiting a Kengistom Palace, it's very nice.
You are holding come here.
But tomorrow we are visiting London Eye Flight and Buckingham Palace.
And today Tom and I go to the hotel for we drink a tea at five o'clock.
Adeu!!
Noelia Jiménez Godoy
Hi Tania,
I'm on holiday in London with my dad,my mum and my brother.It's very raining here.
At the moment I'm sitting in an Internet in the cofee, with my brother an my dad visit the Buckingham palace, and my mum is shop in the Big Ben.
Tomorrow visit the museums,shops,...
Good bye!
See you soon.
kisses
Judit Cuesta
Hy ximo!
I'm in london with mi father my mother and mi brother.at the moment i in sanint jame's park with mi father. my mum and my brother i in bigben.In london there are plesant temperatures.
good bay ximo
beiron 1rc
aLbert la hora del blog sta maL pk eh puesto la redaccion a las 22:30
Hi Karla
I'm on holiday here in Londo with my mum, dad and my dog Cubano.
It gets so cold that I ever stayed the hotel.
At the moment I'm sitting on the computer internet coit my mum and we're drinking a te.
She reallylikes it so we come here every day.
In the evenings we went to the cinema.
Tomorrow we're bisiting to Bridge London.
I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon.
Nuria
Hola Albert sóc la Sira Tresserras de 1er B.
Hi Judit,,
I'm on holiday here in London with my mum and dad. It's very warm, and cold here.
Tomorrow we going to visit centre of London, and we going shopping.
I hope you're having a good time.
See you soon,
Sira.
Hy Noelia. I'm holyday in London whit my parents and my sister. It's hot, at the momen we are visit at London Eye it's fabulos. Tomorrow we're going to shopping and Big Ben it's
See sou soon
Ainhoa Noguero 1erB
Hi Emma,
I'm on holiday here in London With my parents. It's very cold,at the moment we're stay in the hotel, we visiting the city.
Tomorrow we're visiting the Big Ben and shopping centre.
See you soon,
Marina
Albert ho sento, no ho he pogut enviar abans perque em donava error
Albert soc la Marina de 1erC com has vist el meu comentari ha sorit amb el nom de Ainhoa es per que com teniem totes dues problemes amb la conexió l'hem fet desde casa amb el mateix nom.
Hi Cristian,
I´m on holiday here in London with my parents and my brother.
Is very difficult to speak engish.
London is very big and very cowded.
I´m sitting in an internet. In the evenings i play basketball with my brother.
Every day i getting up at seven o´clok.
I like the lanscape.
See you soon,
Sergi
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1.I'M IN HOLiDAY IN London with my mum my brother my dad my oncle my cousin my cousin my cousin the more age.
2.It's very cold here , why go with soil jacket and thesea water is very ....... .
3.Thanks of the messenger i can tell you what .
4.My brother and my mum visit the Tower of London , my oncle and my cousin visit to visit to Lonodn Eye and my mum and my aunt visit to Westminster.
5.The football of London Is fantastic.
6.I'm tomorrow visit to Big Ben.
7.It's go to buy clothes and a gift for you .
8.To here learned to skate in skate,i'm a good time bie bie
Hello, boys and girls,
How are your Easter holidays going?
I give you the marks for your compositions:
1A:
Marc Torres A
Eva Jiménez A
Marta Barrena B
Laura Fischer A
Jenny Mulero C
Anna Molins B
Axel Saguillo B
Cristian Alvarez D
Gemma Berenguer C
Carol Pérez A
Glòria Oller C
Helga Martí C
Borja D
Carlos Gutíérrez D
Joan Domenech D
Lorena Vendrell D (traductor)
Carol Viñas C
1B:
Joel Cruz b
Berta Palaus B
Gemma Mir C
Joan Mrtín D
Dani Sanleón C
Nerea Barcelona C
Noelia Jiménez B
Juan Diego B
Manel Teruel C
Júlia Nogueras B
Núria Gabeiras D
Sira Tresserres D
Ainhoa Noguero D
Sergi Castells D
Angel García D (traductor)
1C:
Melisa López C
Aleix Castells D
Laura Espínola B
Xoel C
Minerva Llor C
Judit Pla C
Miriam Miralles C
Antonio Lara B
Hèctor Gómez C
Beiron Román D
Marina Muñoz C
Enjoy your holidays and get energy for the last term. It will be hard.
Bye,
Albert.
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